Here I now lie, deep in my bed
With all these thoughts in my head
Swirling around with some glee
As if they are on a damn spree.
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Tristan Robert Lange (
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Will the thoughts let you get to sleep?!
Not usually! 😪 But that's also when some poetry comes out, like this protest piece! (in that I was protesting that I couldn't sleep! LOL!) Thank you, my friend, for reading and commenting! ❤️🙏
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you, Tony!
You're welcome Tristan
Excellent.
Thank you, Thomas! Much appreciated!
you have a talent my friend,
and I will never tire of saying so;
Awww! Thank you, Melvin! Your encouragement really does mean the world to me. Thank you so much, my friend! ❤️🙏
Are you thinking of good things ?, enjoyed the read
At that point, I was just thinking of wanting to go to bed! No bad thoughts that I remember, though! 🤣 So, yeah, I suppose they were good! 😊 Thank you for reading, my friend. Glad the poem delivered and you enjoyed. ❤️🙏
You are very welcome
Wow and after the Christmas season too. I think I know what you mean Tristan and so well put.
Thank you, Soren! 😊 I am glad the poem delivered, my friend! ❤️🙏 I really appreciate your support and encouragement!
So so relatable... had this feeling just last night
Yeah. Tons of fun! LOL! 😂 Thank you so much for reading and sharing your experience! Much appreciated, my friend! ❤️🙏
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Wow! Great brevity!! 🤩
Some nights
the same exact thing
happens to me?¿ 😳
Great read, relatable too!
Best regards my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Right!?!?! Gotta love it! NOT! 🤣 Thank you, Thad! Much appreciated, my friend! ❤️🙏
If I slept alone I would hardly sleep as thoughts would keep me up the whole night. I guess that makes me a social sleeper? 😴 💤
LOL! I guess so! Yeah, having an active mind can be a benefit...but rarely when trying to sleep! 😴 Though, on the bright side, I got a poem out of it! 🤣 If you can't beat 'em, might as well join in! Thank you for reading and your feedback, my friend!
Yes! When I’m alone that’s the easiest go to- write it out… 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
Been there and done that .. some of us find it a blessing and others much more of a curse .. I kind of switch from one to another depending on all sorts of things going on around me ..
Me too, it can take on both forms. Since I pulled a cute little poem out if it, I'll call this time 'round a blessing! LOL! Thanks for reading and engaging, Neville! 🙏❤️
Tee hee,,,,it's true though.
Right?!?! So true! LOL! Thank you for reading and commenting! 😊
Tee hee,,,,it's true though.
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