Notice of absence from arqios
an absence of Presence conjures Absenceβ¦
an absence of Presence conjures Absenceβ¦
As dawn breaks
and
the fire's embers dim,
We rise with the sun,
refreshed from within.
Nature awakens,
the birds greet the day,
Together we embrace
the forest's gentle way.
Hikes on winding trails,
exploring the unknown,
Building memories,
seeds of joy are sown.
In the heart of the wild,
our spirits are free,
Connected by the land,
forever we shall be.
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Author:
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- Published: February 12th, 2025 02:59
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Lovely ) I like the soft gentle tone to this poem
Thanks kindly. It balances out my rougher natureππ»π
Yes, sounds like a pleasant day out, weather permitting.
Always good weather for a day out Oππ»π
A poem of the unity of nature and ourselves. What could be more true in that we are also nature. Nature with a sense of self. Sentient we walk with all nature around and in us. Lovely Cryptic
It does take a bit of getting used to, the concept (and truth) of us being Nature as well! ππ»π
Very gentle piece.It is inspirational.Well done
Thatβs nice to hear and know of, thanks DWa ππ»π
In peace and harmony with nature, an uplifting write, enjoyed the read
Glad to hear that. Sometimes I wonder if my thoughts are worth sharing at all. Thank you ππ»π
You are very welcome
arqios, your thought are ALWAYS worth sharing. Beautifully penned. πΉππ
Thanks APππ»π
Well yes, I hate to.say it but I like it very much π€£
Awwβ¦ thanks friend ππ»π
Due to exams, I've been up late studying and missing my sunrise routine. Thanks for reminding me of its beauty! Love it!!
Oh nice. I havenβt really done the sunrise routine in a long time, so itβs special when I do get toβ¦perhaps thatβs why I write about it as well. Thank you for your visit and much welcome thoughts, specially as your schedule is quite demanding ππ»π
That's thoughtful...! A beautiful way to capture what was once out of reach for you.
Indeed! I have found poetry to be a faithful companion in lifeβs years of journeying and love itβs expression and the interaction of like-spirited journeyers ππ»π
Ah. I look out side and see nature's white powdery stuff. Mother nature likes to snort this time of year, evidently! π€£ Not for me! Oh how I could go for a nice long hike outside in warmer weather. Thank you for bringing me there! LOL! (Even though I just came back from such a place). Second day back and I am already complaining! π€£ Loved this, my friend. πΉπ
Haha! Excellent choice of words there. π€£π¨βοΈ Weβve been having π₯΅ π after heatwave. Time to hit the waves π΄ π π
Here you there! Enjoy!
Will do, mate ππ»ποΈ
I came across a writer saying that in one sense we have to rebel against nature. Meaning the mechanicity of nature. The current rebellion against nature is adding more mechanicity! We got it all upside down.
Perhaps weβre all kinda Down Under! ππ
.....a spell!
β¦ a grand delusion, even!
So very true arqios.
Andy
Thank you Andy ππ»π
Nice One arqios
Soothing And Resplendent
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