Alice folow the white rabbit and you'll see
Things quite differently
The Madhater is a cyber punk
Posting crazy stuff on the web
The March Hare
Plays the guitar and flys a motorcycle through the air
Speaking of transportation
Flying cars everywhere Zooming here and there
The white rabbit now plays drums
In a band with twittel dee and twittel dum
The caterpillar now smokes pot and is quite the sage
The queen of hearts has gone crazy and just raves
There is more Alice as you will see
But I'll leave that up to thee
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Fun, fanciful and a great read loved it from beginning to end. In other words it took me down the rabbit hole
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Went down that rabbit hole and thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for the...ehem...trip! Loved the poem, Tony! Great job! ❤️
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You're welcome, Tony!
Good write T.
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Your imagination is in creative overdrive. What a fun write and a new take on Alice in Wonderland. Great job. The caterpillar smoking pot, made me laugh. Well done Tony.
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Fantastic and fun.
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A captivating poem
and quite humorous indeed! 🤣
Very witty, I can picture
caterpillars 🐛 smoking weed! 🚬
Thanks for sharing 🙏😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, best regards
I had a day like that years ago when someone slipped an acid tab into my coke at a gig .. .. Nice one bro .. Neville
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