They came from deep below the sea.
Bloodsuckers of Portsmouth they be.
Hungry for blood obviously!
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Slink slowly along in the night.
Sucks life from folks is their delight.
Have a voracious appetite.
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With razor claws on paws and feet.
Any living thing that they meet,
will instantly become minced meat.
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These creatures aren't from a sideshow.
Their skin tinged with phosphorous glow.
A vicious bite it will bestow!
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Born out of "toxic waste frontiers".
When near your body it adheres.
Drinking your blood it perseveres!
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Warm blood it yearns for the foremost.
Like Vampires they will suck the host.
Their victims bones litter the coast!
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The product of vile, dirty swill.
These monsters mean for no goodwill.
Immortal so you cannot kill;
beware out there, much blood they'll spill~
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Author:
Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 29th, 2025 11:49
- Comment from author about the poem: Poem and "true gory story" folks, I could'na made this up! LOL!
- Category: Short story
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments6
It's the mother-in law! lol.
Howdy Orchidee!! ๐๐ฟ
Thank you! ๐
Yes could be the mother-in law!ยฟยฟ๐ณ
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
Haha
Hii poetess!! ๐ ๐ฟ
Thank you! ๐
Beast ๐บ wishes! ๐ค ๐ฅ Thad
A monster thriller that is dark at its core. The story of something out of the night. Very nice.
Howdy Soren!! ๐๐บ
Thank you!! ๐
Muahahaaaaa!๐ฟ
Beast regards ๐ โ๏ธ Thad
Your getting darker and darker !!, great read
Hii Tobani!! ๐๐บ
Yes, I'm going through
a dark stage, don't wanna
bore the reader! Muahahaa! ๐ฟ
Beast regards โ๏ธ๐ Thad
You are very welcome
You know I dig the genre and the poem, my friend. Well done. This one gives the chills, for sure! Oh...and the picture you chose! Fits perfectly! Well done! ๐ค๐
Hii Tristan!! ๐๐ฟ
Thank you!! ๐
Glad I could bring
you a sCARe today!! ๐ฎ
Have a nice Thursday!
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
You're welcome, Thad! Conversely, I hope you have a great Friday! ๐
Beware Thad, I used to work at Portsmouth so I am friends with these creatures and they know where you live. LOL.
Andy
Hii Andy!! ๐ ๐ฟ
Thanks for your comment
and the warning too!! ๐ฑ
Much appreciated, thank you!! โบ๏ธ
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
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