They came from deep below the sea.
Bloodsuckers of Portsmouth they be.
Hungry for blood obviously!
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Slink slowly along in the night.
Sucks life from folks is their delight.
Have a voracious appetite.
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With razor claws on paws and feet.
Any living thing that they meet,
will instantly become minced meat.
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These creatures aren't from a sideshow.
Their skin tinged with phosphorous glow.
A vicious bite it will bestow!
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Born out of "toxic waste frontiers".
When near your body it adheres.
Drinking your blood it perseveres!
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Warm blood it yearns for the foremost.
Like Vampires they will suck the host.
Their victims bones litter the coast!
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The product of vile, dirty swill.
These monsters mean for no goodwill.
Immortal so you cannot kill;
beware out there, much blood they'll spill~
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Author:
Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 29th, 2025 11:49
- Comment from author about the poem: Poem and "true gory story" folks, I could'na made this up! LOL!
- Category: Short story
- Views: 14
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments6
It's the mother-in law! lol.
Howdy Orchidee!! 👋👿
Thank you! 👍
Yes could be the mother-in law!¿¿😳
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Haha
Hii poetess!! 👋 👿
Thank you! 😜
Beast 👺 wishes! 🤗 🥀 Thad
A monster thriller that is dark at its core. The story of something out of the night. Very nice.
Howdy Soren!! 👋👺
Thank you!! 👍
Muahahaaaaa!👿
Beast regards 😁 ✌️ Thad
Your getting darker and darker !!, great read
Hii Tobani!! 👋👺
Yes, I'm going through
a dark stage, don't wanna
bore the reader! Muahahaa! 👿
Beast regards ✌️😁 Thad
You are very welcome
You know I dig the genre and the poem, my friend. Well done. This one gives the chills, for sure! Oh...and the picture you chose! Fits perfectly! Well done! 🤘😈
Hii Tristan!! 👋👿
Thank you!! 😊
Glad I could bring
you a sCARe today!! 😮
Have a nice Thursday!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
You're welcome, Thad! Conversely, I hope you have a great Friday! 😊
Beware Thad, I used to work at Portsmouth so I am friends with these creatures and they know where you live. LOL.
Andy
Hii Andy!! 👋 👿
Thanks for your comment
and the warning too!! 😱
Much appreciated, thank you!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
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