A girl stands on a hill
looking out to silver stars
glistening over the relaxed blue sea
she looks to the birds wandering in the background
and the moon shining silently
in all its white ways
like daisy petals made into just one circle
She stands on a hill
looking out to the silver stars
The birds quietly drifting in the background
and she sees there’s white and silver flickering amongst the blue
shining by the pink and purple waves of colour
she sees a bird floating by the moon
all alone
away from the rest of the birds
seeming to be standing tenderly together
and she wanders
does the lonely bird wish to be friends with the daisy like moon
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 30th, 2025 02:25
- Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by this picture found on Pinterest
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Comments8
Beautifully done!
Thankyou 🙂
Welcome 🕊
Beautiful 🌹
Thankyou teddy 🙂🌸
A wonderful ekphrasis, my friend. The picture is beautiful, but your poem brings an even deeper beauty. Loved this! 🌹👏
Thankyou 🙂 I liked writing this poem .. nice to be inspired by pictures .
Beautiful
Thankyou 🙂
You're welcome
Good write D.
Thank you
Lonliness needs company. A poem where I feel a reaching out in the vastness of the universe. Nicely written
It does need company ., Thankyou for the kind words ))
Very good interpretation of the picture Caring Dove.
Andy
Thanks for the kind words 🙂 glad you liked my poem
Good writing, keep going !
Thankyou !🙂
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