Imagine If You Will.

Goldfinch60



Imagine if you will a walk along the shore,

The soft sandy beach of a sun kissed island.

The waves lapping gently at your feet,

The sun warming upon your skin.

 

Imagine if you will a view from the mountain,

The valleys and cliffs seen below.

The satisfaction of completing the climb,

That was both challenging and rewarding.

 

Imagine if you will a walk through the woods,

The trees allowing a path through them,

To a clearing where your loved one waits,

Where you can be together forever.

 

Imagine if you will this world at peace,

No war, no strife, just freedom and joy.

No rancour with your neighbours,

No matter what your differences.

 

Imagine if you will a journey to the stars,

Through the vastness of space.

Travelling towards your Nirvana,

Where all is peaceful and contentment rules.

 

Imagine if you will . . . . . . . . . .?

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 31st, 2025 01:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just imagine.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 24
  • Users favorite of this poem: arqios, Accidental Poet
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold. And imagine me not singing too? lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Orchi. I would rather not imagine that.LOL

      Andy

    • sorenbarrett

      A nice thought Andy beautiful images flow through it and in the distance I hear a bit of John Lennon. Lovely

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you soren, most kind. Yes that song by John Lennon is so meaningful.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        Beautiful. 🌹

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind Teddy, Thank you.

          Andy

        • Neville



          John Winston Lennon just sprang to mind .. These mind games you set for us are a good wake up call and help set a magnificent view of the day ahead .. 😎

          • Goldfinch60

            Yes that song is so powerful Neville,

            Andy

          • Poetic Licence

            A lovely read full of wonderful images, really enjoyed

            • Goldfinch60

              Much appreciated Tobani, thank you.

              Andy

              • Poetic Licence

                You are very welcome

              • arqios

                Loving this Andy! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you arqios, most kind.

                  Andy

                  • arqios

                    Most welcome Andy

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    This is wonderful and reminiscent of John Lennon. A wonderful poem, my friend.

                  • Accidental Poet

                    I imagine that our current world just magically changed to that of what you penned here Andy, Great write. 😁

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you AP, yes just imagine.

                      Andy

                    • David Wakeling

                      Some wonderful things to imagine.I think in the end the imagination never let's you down.Enjoyable read

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you David, much appreciated.

                        Andy

                      • John Prophet

                        Wow every time I stop by I get scorched by all the 🔥😉Nice write
                        John

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you John.

                          Andy

                        • Cassie58

                          You transported me to many wonderful places Andy and I was thankful for the power of your imagination. Beautiful imagery and a sense of calm. Great post.

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Your kind words are much appreciated Cassie, thank you.

                            Andy



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