Well,
It seems my name's still
On the guest list
For the abyss
Need a dragonlift
Before the $%&!
Hits
The fan
Man, I am
Still getting
In my own way
Not to go
Too much tension slows
The vibrations
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Comments3
Every day I look to see if my name is still on the guest list. Change is rapid. I hear tension growing in this poem. Nicely done
The old demon, "Trying too hard" (amongst others!)
Has been raising its head of late!
Need to take
It a little more easy
Tense indeed. I have felt my name on the same guest list, methinks. Well done! 🌹👏
Thanks a million, Tristan!
You're welcome, my friend!
I've heard tell that there's at least one location here in the USA where, if you're good, you kin get in possibly for free, but I'm not persuaded I want the indulgence. Fascinating and intriguing, you charming rascal! Thank you for sharing this characteristically rendered pretty number loaded to the hilt with poignancy to haunt and excellent imagery.
Thanks for dropping by!
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