Drowning

accross_world_with_u

Frozen depths pull me,

Piercing silence surrounds me-

Life’s flame softly fades.

Author: accross_world_with_u ( Offline)
Published: February 2nd, 2025 00:21
Category: Haiku
Views: 17
Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange

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Cheeky Missy February 2nd, 2025 00:46
Exquisite in haunting brevity with excellent imagery and a keen poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
- accross_world_with_uFebruary 2nd, 2025 02:05
  Thank you for an encouraging comment! 🫶
- Cheeky MissyFebruary 2nd, 2025 02:10
  But of course, my pleasure, you're more than welcome.
Tristan Robert Lange February 2nd, 2025 07:03
Wonderful, my friend. It says a lot in its brevity. ❤️🙏 The emotions really come through.
- accross_world_with_uFebruary 2nd, 2025 08:56
  Thank you for your kind encouragement! 🫶
- Tristan Robert LangeFebruary 2nd, 2025 12:19
  You're welcome.

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