When twilight fades and night begins to bloom,
The moon ascends, a lantern in the sky,
With silver beams dispelling shades of gloom,
And stars, like diamonds, glisten bright on high.
In silent harmony, they share their light,
A cosmic dance upon the velvet night,
The moon's soft glow, the stars' celestial flight,
In tranquil beauty, both their hearts unite.
Beneath their gaze, the world in slumber lies,
A tranquil sea beneath the starry choir,
Their whispered secrets sung in lullabies,
Igniting dreams with soft, ethereal fire.
Dear moon and stars, your timeless grace is there,
In night's embrace, I see you really care.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Reflection
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Comments14
The moon was my first ever lantern and the stars my first friends in the sky! Really good one Andy 🙏🏻🕊
Fine words arqios and I understand that. Thank you.
Andy
Very beautiful poem 🙂 love this
Much appreciated Yellow Rose.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
Andy
Most lovely the general theme and images presented are most romantic. A lovely piece that flows with good rhyme and meter. Loved it Andy
Very much appreciated soren, thank you.
Andy
A swell sonnet Andy .. truly delightful 🌖🌙👍
Most kind Neville, thank you.
Andy
Lovely images painted in a beautiful piece of writing, really enjoyed it.
Thank you PL, much appreciated.
Andy
You are very welcome
a beautiful reflection and a beautiful poem.It reminds me to pay more attention to good old Nature.Thanks
Nature is glorious David, thank you for your kind words.
Andy
Andy, this is a super sonnet. Wonderful imagery and the lines flow perfectly. Very much admired. First rate poetry. Have a lovely day.
So very much appreciated Cassie, thank you.
Andy
Vivid and sharp. Excellent.
Thank you Thomas.
Andy
How incredibly romantic and beautiful ❤️
So kind Teddy, thank you.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
Moon and stars sonnet------ poem that is beautiful, romantic and captivating. I found it magnificent and seraphic.
Beautiful construction of words! I appreciate your work in writing the poem.
Also the song along with it made the whole reading journey more exciting. I love listening music and playing piano. Thanks for uploading the song.
Hope to read more of your poems in the coming days!🌒🌛 😉❤️
Thank you for your kind words Simurgh, much appreciated.
Andy
Andy you are most welcome for commenting so nice a message to me!🌹
Continue writing more poems in the coming days. Please read my poems as well.
Nice One Andy
Sweet Rhythms
Thank you Reynaldo.
Andy
I enjoyed it! 🌠
Thank you Li.
Andy
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