Moon And Stars Sonnet.

Goldfinch60



When twilight fades and night begins to bloom,

The moon ascends, a lantern in the sky,

With silver beams dispelling shades of gloom,

And stars, like diamonds, glisten bright on high.

 

In silent harmony, they share their light,

A cosmic dance upon the velvet night,

The moon's soft glow, the stars' celestial flight,

In tranquil beauty, both their hearts unite.

 

Beneath their gaze, the world in slumber lies,

A tranquil sea beneath the starry choir,

Their whispered secrets sung in lullabies,

Igniting dreams with soft, ethereal fire.

 

Dear moon and stars, your timeless grace is there,

In night's embrace, I see you really care.

 

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  • arqios

    The moon was my first ever lantern and the stars my first friends in the sky! Really good one Andy 🙏🏻🕊

    • Goldfinch60

      Fine words arqios and I understand that. Thank you.

      Andy

    • Caring dove

      Very beautiful poem 🙂 love this

      • Goldfinch60

        Much appreciated Yellow Rose.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        A fine write Gold.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Orchi.

          Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          Most lovely the general theme and images presented are most romantic. A lovely piece that flows with good rhyme and meter. Loved it Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            Very much appreciated soren, thank you.

            Andy

          • Neville


            A swell sonnet Andy .. truly delightful 🌖🌙👍

            • Goldfinch60

              Most kind Neville, thank you.

              Andy

            • Poetic Licence

              Lovely images painted in a beautiful piece of writing, really enjoyed it.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you PL, much appreciated.

                Andy

                • Poetic Licence

                  You are very welcome

                • David Wakeling

                  a beautiful reflection and a beautiful poem.It reminds me to pay more attention to good old Nature.Thanks

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Nature is glorious David, thank you for your kind words.

                    Andy

                  • Cassie58

                    Andy, this is a super sonnet. Wonderful imagery and the lines flow perfectly. Very much admired. First rate poetry. Have a lovely day.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So very much appreciated Cassie, thank you.

                      Andy

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Vivid and sharp. Excellent.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Thomas.

                        Andy

                      • Teddy.15

                        How incredibly romantic and beautiful ❤️

                        • Goldfinch60

                          So kind Teddy, thank you.

                          Andy

                        • Tony36

                          Excellent write Andy

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Thank you Tony.

                            Andy

                            • Tony36

                              You're welcome

                            • Simurgh

                              Moon and stars sonnet------ poem that is beautiful, romantic and captivating. I found it magnificent and seraphic.
                              Beautiful construction of words! I appreciate your work in writing the poem.
                              Also the song along with it made the whole reading journey more exciting. I love listening music and playing piano. Thanks for uploading the song.
                              Hope to read more of your poems in the coming days!🌒🌛 😉❤️

                              • Goldfinch60

                                Thank you for your kind words Simurgh, much appreciated.

                                Andy

                                • Simurgh

                                  Andy you are most welcome for commenting so nice a message to me!🌹
                                  Continue writing more poems in the coming days. Please read my poems as well.

                                • Reynaldo Casison

                                  Nice One Andy
                                  Sweet Rhythms

                                  • Goldfinch60

                                    Thank you Reynaldo.

                                    Andy

                                  • Li Yanmey

                                    I enjoyed it! 🌠

                                    • Goldfinch60

                                      Thank you Li.

                                      Andy



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