Sometimes

Caring dove

Sometimes you feel sadly small 

like that little friendly flower 

feeling like the rain is too loud for a little world 

the wind is speaking too much 

and little ears need quiet 

 

all friendly flowers might need are the soft breeze 

the rain too loud for the little world 

the wind speaks too much 

and all that’s needed is the breeze singing softly 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 10th, 2025 07:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes you feel that sense or feeling of ‘ shrinking and feeling small
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • arqios

    Many little flowers together make a happier place, be it a hill, a backyard garden, or any other place! 🙏🏻🕊️

    • Caring dove

      True ! Thankyou 🙂
      I’ve been feeling a bit sad and upset today

      Thanks for the kind words
      Appreciate it

      • arqios

        Most welcome Caring dove 🙏🏻🕊️

      • Poetic Licence

        Hopefully the breeze will start singing softly.

      • orchidee

        Good write dove.

        • Caring dove

          Thankyou orchidee

        • Cassie58

          Sad poem. Hope you feel a change of mood soon Caring Dove. Take care.

          • Caring dove

            Thanks Cassie .. sometimes I feel a little bit ‘ small ‘ .. thanks for your kind words

          • Distant View

            Sad, but poetically expressive. We all need to find that quiet place where the breeze sings softly!

          • NinjaGirl

            this is a very beautiful poem

          • Goldfinch60

            That gentle breeze and the sun will always be with you Yellow Rose.

            Andy



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