Tempting serpent of Eden
How often we've been meeting!
I know your medicine
Is only a temporary
Heaven
Yet, by you I so often
Get toasted
So I asked my pal Moses
To uplift you.
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
Offline) - Published: February 10th, 2025 19:10
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Comments3
Hmm. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning, haunting poignancy. Intriguing and frightening. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for dropping by. Still not finished with this rhyme!
Aha. Iz de sarpent gonna give it iz seal of approval???!
I love poems that are filled with double entendre's and this one is full of them. Images well set in this frame and metaphor as well. So nicely constructed in so few words it is definately a fave
Thanks a million!
Bronze you, then lift you - such a strong image and motion. 🙏🏻🕊️
Thanks a million!
You're welcome, Mutley 🙏🏻🕊️
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