Life can have its ups and downs
Sometimes it leaves you feeling insecure
Fear holds you hostage
Until someone opens that rescue door
So hard to let someone see
You in that state of mind
But you can’t deny
Help from one so kind
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- Published: February 12th, 2025 00:57
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Very nice poem and words so true. Thank you for the read.
Thank you for reading and the compliment. π
Indeed, to save ourselves and our sanity, we must accept help from others. Sticking to one's ego has a price. Better to keep both feet on the ground and make some sacrifice. It's give and take. The price for staying alive or sane.
Yes I couldn't agree more . Thank you Soman. π
Good write AP. Yes, sometimes we may say to ourselves 'This can't go on' - some worry, fear, etc. But unfortunately life with KP has to go on as she has put a ball and chain on my leg and thrown away the key to it. Doh! lol.
Well, you have a hacksaw right? The chain or the leg, the choice is yours. π
I didn't think of that! lol.
Where's Fido when you need him? π
Pride is what keeps us apart. Humility is so much more likeable. Nicely written
Thanks soren, appreciate your reading and your compliment. π
Yes! Because no one else will, and if everyone strove at kindness, what a world it would be for us all! ππ»π
While at risk of someone seeing you in that state, it is a comfort to know that someone cares enough to not pass by and not want to offer to console you. Thanks arqios for reading and your comment. ππ
Yes, thatβs nice- consolation ππ»ποΈ
When in need take the help someone has kindly offered. Poignant and true write.
Thank you Poetic for stopping by and commenting. ππ
You are very welcome
E, non prende per il culo π€£ good thoughts dear A.P ps, one who cares can always see a friend in difficulty π
I seem to be making a lot of use of the Italian to English translator lately. Hope they don't start charging me for it. π
Rare it may be that a person cares enough to stop and check if someone is ok, but some of us its in our DNA to help. π
Beautiful message
Thanks for reading and complimenting. π
Of course!
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