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Will be absent until Jan 6th. Happy holidays to all!
Early embers
Early morning
Left over from the fire last night
The arsonist is long gone by now
My house
All ruined
But you haven't killed me yet
Somehow I make it out alive again
Embers remain
Years later
They still burn me quite often
It wasn't the arsonist's intention
But it was his fault
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A very clever use of a powerful metaphor to achieve a feeling of past passion that has fallen to ash but still evokes burning pains. Brilliant one of your best a definate fave
Thank you!
Wow! I enjoyed this read. I read it twice. Thank you
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Thanks for commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
That is a very clever way of expressing surviving pain from a long lost love, great write
Thank you!
You are very welcome
An absolute fave and a great use of metaphor. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
Thank you so much!
Powerful work.
Thank you!
Excellent write
Thank you!
You're welcome
Resonant! Thank you. 🙏 😊
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