The Moon smiled upon the sight of Earth
Not knowing the secrets that lie beneath the dirt
As the moon lit up, Earth turned away
With a secret they'll take to the grave
The day has come for Earth to tell the Moon of their lies
The Earth was the Sun in disguise
The Moon's tears fell like raindrops on a stormy day
For the Sun and Moon couldn't be together anyway
The Sun was either warm or too hot
There was no in between, really
The Moon however was cold, more often than not
It's such a pity
Said the moon to the Sun
One day soon, when the day is over and the night has begun
The sun replied
With burning tears in their eyes
The Sun's tears fall like shooting stars on Earth
Not knowing the secrets that lie beneath the dirt
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Comments4
A twisted tale of poetic fantasy that carries the reader into the realm of all possibilities stretching the mind and opening child like flexibility. Great story and a fun poem. There may be more metaphor here than meets the eye.
Inspiring, thank you for sharing.
Changing "It's such a pity" to "A love never seen"
Doesn't fit. Nevermind
A very clever write opening the reader up to thinking of all possibilities, a really enjoyable read
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