Chasing a purpose is like chasing the night. Once you catch it, it turns into light. Chasing fulfillment, oh what a chore. It always leaves you wanting more. Chasing financial gain is such a pain. Money leaves faster than gained. I had not found any of these in abundance yet. Couldn't find just the right fit. Many jobs, many new starts. Just to end up with an unfulfilled heart. When I write, words come to life and jump off the page when arranged just right. What is the secret, where is the key. Is there anyone who can help me unlock all three?
LA
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Author:
LA (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 15th, 2025 00:41
- Category: Reflection
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Winsomely rendered with a lilting rhythm and excellent imagery, not to mention a charming poignancy haunting it, beware whom you call since the lurid tales abound. Thank you for sharing.
Missy, every word you write seems to have elegance and grace. Thank you for reading and commenting.
The more you chase the more let down you will be when it arrives, enjoyed the read
Perhaps it is the chasing that is the problem? Shift your perspective to achieve? Thank you for commenting Poetic.
You are very welcome
The firs line of this poem is what caught my attention it is clever in its poetic concept turned into rhyme. Lovely
Thank you for interacting Soren. The hook is key and sometimes hard to find. Revision, revision, revision.
Very engaging in form, style, and message… seems to me you already got those three! 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you arqios, I appreciate your interaction.
You’re much welcome wwfm, 🙏🏻🕊and your interaction is much appreciated as way🕊👍🏻
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