Sometimes

Caring dove


Notice of absence from Caring dove
…..,,

Sometimes 

sometimes I walk through a day 

wandering where the sparkles are 

and the upbeat sun 

 

why am tired , sinking , sad 

like a grey cloud 

wanting to feel happy like the yellow of the sun 

and energised like music or a dance 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2025 10:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a day today where I’ve been feeling flat tired sad , a bit unhappy in myself I guess Makes you wander how that’s fair when others are smiling and happy Tiday could be a bit better
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 24
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  • arqios

    That’s quite a feeling to deal with. I write or mope about or read or all three. Mostly 🙏🏻🕊️

    • Caring dove

      Thankyou . I seem to be struggling with how I feel .. my dissociation and feeling tired .. I lose motivation sometimes , when I feel like this

    • sorenbarrett

      A bright poem that brings sunshine and warmth

      • Caring dove

        Thankyou for the kind words )

        • Caring dove

          Thanks

          Wish I felt happier today

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Let me tell you, my dear friend, I am right here with. Been that kinda day for me too. So...hugs 🤗 from across the pond! ❤️‍🩹

        • Goldfinch60

          Today WILL be better Yellow Rose, each new day is wonderful.

          Andy



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