Forgive your past self
Out of the fortunes of this graceful present time
Joyfully erect a wall between you and him, with no door and no keys
With ugly rough cement and shapeless stones on your side
And flowers, paint and pictures on his
As you rummage through the closet of your mind,
Keep your mental hands away from his shelf.
Lest he slowly encroaches from behind
Swallows, and dissolves you back into himself
If you must look at the shades of skin,
you have shed and the ones you have kept
Do not look back at him with mockery or contempt
Lest in envy he strips off your now glowing shiny skin
Stop not at his yards, even when you are tired and lost
He will knock you down from your high horse
Gorge out your eyes, make you blind and morose
Visit him not, for he is now a ghost.
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Author:
Abraham Konchellah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 16th, 2025 03:44
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Comments3
This from the fount to the wording is a haunting write that gives advice in metaphor that is clear and wise. A very nice write that deserves a fave
I am very grateful for your kind words! Knowing it's one of your favourite really inspires me to continue writing and sharing
Forget your sins of the past and try to better in the future, a well written write even if a little haunting, enjoyed the read
Yes that's the message. Thank you for your kind review, Poetic Licence. I am pleased that you enjoyed reading my poem.
You are very welcome
Great metaphor here Abraham and wise words. Forgiving yourself can be quite hard to do. It is easier to forgive others. I enjoyed reading you.
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