Sun On Our Lives Sonnet.

Goldfinch60



The dark grey days have been with us so long,

Yet this morning the sun shone on our life,

Bringing happiness and light to our throng,

No longer darkening our days with strife.

 

Into the bright day many steps we trod,

Enjoying the glory of Natures world,

Glowing in the paths that that our world had shod,

Where the beauty of life around us whirled.

 

Such a wondrous time we had on this day,

Walking together with such harmony,

Our time with each other showing the way,

The light of our world so very sunny.

 

This day was a wonderful day for us,

And we know it will forever be thus.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 18th, 2025 02:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: We have had grey days for so long it was wonderful to be out in the sunshine today.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 20
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  • arqios

    Let the Spring and its odes dawn and live long to burnished 🌅 sunsets 🙏🏻🕊️

    • Goldfinch60

      So true arqios, thank you.

      Andy

      • arqios

        Welcome Andy🙏🏻🕊️

      • orchidee

        A fine write Gold. I read of somewhere in or near the Arctic Circle, not having seen the sun for 4 months or more.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Orchi, never been up there so I wouldn't know.

          Andy

          • orchidee

            Didn't we go there some millions of years ago? Was it sunny then?

          • Teddy.15

            I hope it sprouts a bean or two 🤣 sending some beautiful Italian sunshine although we too have had a lot of gloomy days! ☀️

            • Goldfinch60

              May that sunshine be forever in our lives Teddy,

              Andy

            • Poetic Licence

              The sun has a magical effect,it seems to just make people feel better, and we all need some of that, enjoyed the read

              • Goldfinch60

                So true Tobani the light must always be in our lives.

                Andy

              • sorenbarrett

                Gold you know how to turn a grey day into a sunny one. Once again you have turned the negative into a positive by introducing love. Lovely

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind soren, thank you for your wonderful words.

                  Andy

                • Reynaldo Casison

                  Nice One Gold
                  Nice And Sunny

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Reynaldo, may that light always be in our lives.

                    Andy

                  • David Wakeling

                    This is a wonderful positive poem.Inspirational. Well done

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you David, most kind.

                      Andy

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Superb work.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Thomas.

                        Andy

                      • Tony36

                        Excellent write Andy

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Most kind Tony, thank you.

                          Andy

                          • Tony36

                            You're welcome

                          • Cassie58

                            What a difference a little sunshine can make. We too have had many grey days. Looking forward to spring Andy. An uplifting write. .

                            • Goldfinch60

                              It certainly does Cassie, Spring is close. Thank you for your kind words.

                              Andy

                            • Doggerel Dave

                              Goldfinch60
                              February 18th, 2025 02:52
                              Strangely I have just put this song on my poem for today Dave.

                              Andy

                              Doggerel Dave
                              February 18th, 2025 04:19
                              Should save hordes of interested poets, hungry for a source here,
                              https://rodgersandhammerstein.com/song/oklahoma/oh-what-a-beautiful-mornin/
                              from an arduous search. Many many thanks, Andy.



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