desperate times
desperate measures
they all say it
this desperation
is the desperation
to live life
to accomplish goals
to grow and learn
to be something great
I'm desperate
for my own success
I'm desperate
to win.
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Comments5
The desperation within the desperation, well expressed write.
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In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done in using this wordplay.
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Well written and expressed
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At one time I became so desperate to "win," "be great," or whatever that it almost cost me my life (twice). The effortless way is the best!
Great write, by the way.
Haha thank you!
Wow! I get this for sure! Well expressed! Loved the word play and depth! 🙏❤️
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