desperation

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

desperate times

desperate measures

they all say it

this desperation

is the desperation

to live life

to accomplish goals

to grow and learn

to be something great

I'm desperate

for my own success

I'm desperate

to win.

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  • Poetic Licence

    The desperation within the desperation, well expressed write.

  • sorenbarrett

    In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done in using this wordplay.

  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed

    • NinjaGirl

      Thank you!

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • Mutley Ravishes

        At one time I became so desperate to "win," "be great," or whatever that it almost cost me my life (twice). The effortless way is the best!
        Great write, by the way.

        • NinjaGirl

          Haha thank you!

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Wow! I get this for sure! Well expressed! Loved the word play and depth! 🙏❤️



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