Notice of absence from Hey!
I am out in the gazing up at the sky, as every little moment passes by
Imma be back but not in time
Im hurt and what could be worse
I am out in the gazing up at the sky, as every little moment passes by
Imma be back but not in time
Im hurt and what could be worse
No matter how hard I push
You always find a way back
When I try to ask for space or a little time
Oh god if I had a dime
You called me a bitch,and told me to go die
How am I suppose to just sit here and deny
And I will say sit and lie
Because I know that you will go and fly
You will leave me here and make me cry
And I will say this
I wanna die
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sad and depressing
Emotional control a type of abuse that is difficult to measure but separation is a good cure, temporary or permeant. Everyone needs their space. Nicely put
Oml thank you sooo much someone who sees what im saying
whoa whats goin on!?!?!
some serious stuff here....
very well written poem,lil,it explains the sadness of rejection i presume?
i've been rejected many times so i know how it feels
Yea thank you for your comment!!
no problem gurl
Sad but excellent write
Yeah thank you so much Tony!
You're welcome
Excellently rendered with a touch of intrigue and very haunting poignancy. Hang in there and take a needed break. You'll be able to think more clearly later. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for reading!
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