Deep Freeze Daze

Tristan Robert Lange


Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
I am lagging slightly in my responses to comments on my poems due to a crazy schedule. I will be catching up on them soon. I have read them all and will find the time to respond, but did not want you to think I was ghosting. In the meantime, and always:

Read, Write, Rise, Realize.

Tristan 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
It was beautiful before the deep freeze daze,
When the days felt more like dreams and fairy tales,
Than this nightmarish hellscape with its cold haze.
 
On the surface, we looked past the details,
Such as a ninety-five year pipeline.
Worse yet are the liars’ cocktails,
 
Prepared by those who streamline
Belief in corrupt men.
I’ve read the headline:
 
“Never again!”
It there reads.
Ice zen
 
Pleads.
 
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
  • Author: Tristan Robert Lange (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 22nd, 2025 09:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: Form: Terza Rima with gradual syllabic reduction.
  • Category: Sociopolitical
  • Views: 15
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  • Tony36

    Excellent write Tristan

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Thank you so much, Tony! ❤️🙏

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • orchidee

        A fine write T. I gotta reduce these syllables in my poems - or maybe waffle on and use more of 'em! lol.

      • sorenbarrett

        I liked this one very much Tristan the rhyme the flow and the message all came together. Very nice

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Thank you, Soren. Glad it delivered, my friend! 🙏❤️

        • Poetic Licence

          Very nicely written with an easy going flow as you read it, very enjoyable

        • NinjaGirl

          I like this format!

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Thank you, dearest friend! Glad it delivered! ❤️🙏

          • arqios

            If there’s zen, then it will be contained, otherwise anxiety attacks are imminent…🙏🏻🕊

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Indeed. Thank you, my friend, for your time and thoughts. Always appreciated.



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