Deep Freeze Daze

Tristan Robert Lange


Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
Life is full of seasons. This is a season of transition for me, where I will be moving with my family to a new location. As such, with much logistics to consider, I am doing my best to keep up. Please know if I accidentally don't respond, it is not because I am ghosting or becoming distant. Once things settle after the move, I am sure life will return to some normalcy. In the meantime, and always:

Read πŸ‘“, Write ✍️, Rise πŸŒ…, Realize 🀯.

Tristan πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›
It was beautiful before the deep freeze daze,
When the days felt more like dreams and fairy tales,
Than this nightmarish hellscape with its cold haze.
 
On the surface, we looked past the details,
Such as a ninety-five year pipeline.
Worse yet are the liars’ cocktails,
 
Prepared by those who streamline
Belief in corrupt men.
I’ve read the headline:
 
“Never again!”
It there reads.
Ice zen
 
Pleads.
 
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
  • Author: Tristan Robert Lange (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 22nd, 2025 09:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: Form: Terza Rima with gradual syllabic reduction.
  • Category: Sociopolitical
  • Views: 15
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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Comments6

  • Tony36

    Excellent write Tristan

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Thank you so much, Tony! β€οΈπŸ™

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • orchidee

        A fine write T. I gotta reduce these syllables in my poems - or maybe waffle on and use more of 'em! lol.

      • sorenbarrett

        I liked this one very much Tristan the rhyme the flow and the message all came together. Very nice

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Thank you, Soren. Glad it delivered, my friend! πŸ™β€οΈ

        • Poetic Licence

          Very nicely written with an easy going flow as you read it, very enjoyable

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Thank you, friend! Glad you enjoyed it! πŸ™β€οΈ

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • NinjaGirl

              I like this format!

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Thank you, dearest friend! Glad it delivered! β€οΈπŸ™

              • arqios

                If there’s zen, then it will be contained, otherwise anxiety attacks are imminentβ€¦πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Indeed. Thank you, my friend, for your time and thoughts. Always appreciated.



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