Scattered like stars
thoughts glimmer:
constellations of ideas
mosaics of the mind’s workings.
Words twist and turn
a labyrinth of meaning
each line reflects
each stanza holds a riddle
Neon lights and ancient shadows
merge in a collision of epochs
their spirit breathes through the chaos,
a tapestry woven from tradition and innovation.
A chorus emerges, blending the visible and the hidden.
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crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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May that chorus always bring love to our lives arqios.
Andy
Amen! Thanks Andy 🙏🏻🕊️
Good to hear from you still!
Thanks O. I was beginning to wonder 💭
A beautiful vision of the unified relationship of all things from infinitesimally small to the infinitely large from energy to matter. Music of the universe Beautiful.
Music of the Universe, now that sounds excellent 🙏🏻🕊️thank you🙏🏻🕊️
This is very enjoyable word play.It creates wonderful images . Well done commendatore.
Glad it did! Word play is a chief delight 🙏🏻🕊️
The sometime chaos of my own mind can find some consolation here.
Good to know 🙏🏻🕊️thanks kindly
Dancing to the tune of life, lovely read
Let the dance go on🙏🏻🕊️
Beautiful poem and not just the words of it. I love how it is structured to taper outward. From the shorter opening lines to the broader/longer lines at the end. Well done, my friend. That chorus of yours...awesome!🌹👏
On another note, read your notice of absence. Yikes, Glad you are all okay. Cyclones are no fun, I know...having endured Superstorm Sandy. Keeping you all in prayers, my friend.
Thanks man, we’ve been through the worst of it so now it’s time to get things back to normal. 🙏🏻🕊️
Hear you there. Prayers coming your way!
the poem is filled with visual imagery, particularly in the references to stars and constellations, a sense of wonder and exploration.nicely done.
Thanks kindly, you are most appreciated 🙏🏻🕊
Fine imagery here arqios, especially in the first stanza. Lovely.
Thanks Cassie, good to know 🙏🏻🕊️
I'm hooked on deep space too ...................... 🚀🌕🐄
Miss you mate... where could you be these days?
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