Flammable

Mutley Ravishes

Do the flames of passion

Burn

In the over

Or underworlds?

So many times hurled

Into the abyss

It's a helluva job

To climb back out again

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  • NinjaGirl

    Yes, it is, beautiful write

  • Cheeky Missy

    Who said you can, eh?!

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Well, I guess there's a limit to even The Creator's patience!? Meaning a limit placed on "evil."

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      They burn both ways, methinks! A hellavu job indeed. Well done, my friend.

      • Mutley Ravishes

        They sure do! What I was hinting at is that when the passions burn in the "overworld," have we not gone and placed ourselves in the "underworld," spiritually speaking?

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Yes. Spiritually speaking, we do. Very thought-provoking, indeed, my friend.

        • sorenbarrett

          I have heard both and this poem although short is a fun and thought provoking read

          • Mutley Ravishes

            Thanks, Soren, though climbing out of the abyss isn't much fun!

          • Poetic Licence

            Passion taking your feelings to heaven then back to hell, enjoyed the read

          • RSM0812

            Short and sweet. I really like the descriptive words you chose. This is my favorite today.

            • Mutley Ravishes

              Short and sweet, easy to eat!
              Thanks for dropping by.

            • sunshine777

              Yes!



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