Do the flames of passion
Burn
In the over
Or underworlds?
So many times hurled
Into the abyss
It's a helluva job
To climb back out again
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Mutley Ravishes (
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Yes, it is, beautiful write
Thank you!
Who said you can, eh?!
Well, I guess there's a limit to even The Creator's patience!? Meaning a limit placed on "evil."
They burn both ways, methinks! A hellavu job indeed. Well done, my friend.
They sure do! What I was hinting at is that when the passions burn in the "overworld," have we not gone and placed ourselves in the "underworld," spiritually speaking?
Yes. Spiritually speaking, we do. Very thought-provoking, indeed, my friend.
I have heard both and this poem although short is a fun and thought provoking read
Thanks, Soren, though climbing out of the abyss isn't much fun!
Passion taking your feelings to heaven then back to hell, enjoyed the read
Thanks a million!
You are very welcome
Short and sweet. I really like the descriptive words you chose. This is my favorite today.
Short and sweet, easy to eat!
Thanks for dropping by.
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