goodbye
I don't know if I'll miss you
I'm sorry to leave you
goodbye
I believe in you
Pick yourself back up
Dust your shoulders off
I'll be waving goodbye
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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- Published: February 25th, 2025 20:05
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Comments5
This was painful to read, beautiful and painful. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏
Thank you for reading! I like the way you interpreted it! I appreciate your comment as well.
You're welcome. ☺️ There's a sadness in saying goodbye, not suring where the departure will lead to...the uncertainty...and yet, there is also something alluring and inviting about it. Something freeing and, often times, necessary. So, yeah...well done on this. It's really deep and multilayered.
Thank you, yeah goodbyes can be beautiful, healing, and heartbreaking all in one
For sure. You are welcome.
A poem of goodbyes. Nicely said.
Yes, full of them! Thank you for reading!
Sadness, pain, determination and positivity all in one write, nicely done
Thanks!
You are very welcome
Sometimes people need to know that they have someone in their corner. I really like this read.
Thank you!
You seem steady in your choice to say goodbye. love it.
Thank you!
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