goodbye

NinjaGirl

goodbye

I don't know if I'll miss you

I'm sorry to leave you

goodbye

I believe in you

Pick yourself back up

Dust your shoulders off

 

I'll be waving goodbye

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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    This was painful to read, beautiful and painful. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹👏

    • NinjaGirl

      Thank you for reading! I like the way you interpreted it! I appreciate your comment as well.

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        You're welcome. ☺️ There's a sadness in saying goodbye, not suring where the departure will lead to...the uncertainty...and yet, there is also something alluring and inviting about it. Something freeing and, often times, necessary. So, yeah...well done on this. It's really deep and multilayered.

        • NinjaGirl

          Thank you, yeah goodbyes can be beautiful, healing, and heartbreaking all in one

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            For sure. You are welcome.

          • sorenbarrett

            A poem of goodbyes. Nicely said.

            • NinjaGirl

              Yes, full of them! Thank you for reading!

            • Poetic Licence

              Sadness, pain, determination and positivity all in one write, nicely done

            • RSM0812

              Sometimes people need to know that they have someone in their corner. I really like this read.

              • NinjaGirl

                Thank you!

              • Shellsea

                You seem steady in your choice to say goodbye. love it.

                • NinjaGirl

                  Thank you!



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