Somedays
The methodology
Of harnessing the force
Of creativity
Feels like trying to hold back
A tsunami
With an army
Of three ants
Put into a trance
By an enchan-
-tress
Still trying to wield
The lance
From memory
Tensions unconsciously
Robbing spontaneity
Of life
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Comments5
Good grief! You riot, methinks you're having too much fun. All the better for good health, eh?
Yes, fun is more fun than depression!
Majestic. Brought to mind some dervishes twirling as the sacking of Constantinople was in the offing. Random association, I know. 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you. It's amazing what associations a rhyme can call up! Was that when the Vikings were at the gates, or another force?
So many to keep track of!
A very enjoyable read
Thank you! The tensions are not so enjoyable. Well, one day at a time.
You are very welcome
Great write
Thanks, Tony. Here's to spontaneity!
You're welcome
A poem full of metaphor and well written as well.
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