Notice of absence from Caring dove
Sometimes your soul feels sad and your mind feels tired .. not a good day today
Sometimes your soul feels sad and your mind feels tired .. not a good day today
Distance
like not feeling the breeze by your side
when you know
it’s meant to be there
a flower not sensing all that’s meant to be there
herself
others
its lonely inside
sometimes
when you feel your over there
Somewhere
and your missing others
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Difficult to feel removed from yourself and miss others Makes you feel a bit lonely
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Comments4
Loneliness the theme for this poem. There is a feeling of isolation and being removed. Sad
Thanks for comment . I guess my dissociation can make me feel lonely sometimes .
I guess missing people can make someone a bit lonely too
I would imagine it does, my friend. Hoping better days and feelings are ahead for you. Wonderful expression, as always! 🌹👏
Thankyou for the kind words )
You're welcome!
Loneliness is a curse Caring dove. I know how you struggle at times. Hope you have better days and soon. Your poem tells me you aren’t having an easy time. Take care.
You will never be lonely CD, we will always be here.
Andy
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