an overcast sky
late winter feels like it’s spring
i’m alone again
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Tristan Robert Lange (
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I do get this! The seasons unawares, come and go and I’m quite taken by all of it, torn apart; hopeful but overly distraught 🙏🏻🕊
💯 Indeed. Thank you for your time and astute analysis. Indeed. That is exactly where I and this poem are. Much appreciated my friend! ❤️🙏
I think it’s a triumph to be able to depict part of SAD when it’s hard to piece together one’s straying parts on a good day. Respect. 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you, my friend! Than you for understanding. Ironically, given my poem, it's good to not be alone! 🤣🤗❤️
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Such a senryu I always love when I read something that touches me and I can't identify why. Such is the case with this write Tristan. It reaches out of the darkness to the light and with a sense of sadness touches the ethereal.
I am humbled, Soren. I am glad that this came through and touched you in such a way. Thank you for your time, analysis, and feedback, my friend. ❤️🙏
Good write T.
Thank you, Orchi!
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you, Tony!
You're welcome
I love a good cozy cafe, sometimes being alone is refreshing. I like being alone but surrounded by strangers. You're alone but not alone; the beauty of the Anthropocene.
Yeah. Actually, that is why I go to the café. I am technically not alone at home, but very much feel as if I am. At the café, I am alone but alone around strangers who will at least smile at me as I pass by. It is what it is. Good to know I am not "alone" in this. 🤣
Yes! Cafes are the best!
For sure!
But those were the most inspiring images the catalogues used annually for these seasons of transition, a lonely soul in the café, looking out nowhere in particular, just searching the busy, heedless world beyond the window for that unknown something which must surely satisfy. [If only my reply were poetic I'd be good to go, haha!] Winsomely rendered in hauntingly poignant brevity with excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
Indeed, that is the scene! Does he/she find it? 🤷♂️ Thank you my friend! Your time and analysis are always much appreciated! ❤️🙏
The sense of I should be feeling better the sun is out, but I still feel in the dark and alone, enjoyed the read
Yes. Indeed. Thank you, my friend! Glad it delivered! Much appreciated! ❤️🙏
You are very welcome
A clever write! Kind of a cross between haiku and senryu, involving both nature and emotions. Nice one!
Thank you, my friend! Glad it delivered and you enjoyed! Your analysis is much appreciated! ❤️🙏
This one has atmosphere. Great work, Tristan.
Thank you, my friend! Much appreciated! ❤️🙏
conveys such a poignant message, and yet a ray of hope is peeping out too
Thank you so much, Your time and feedback are much appreciated! ❤️🙏
you are always welcome
keep creating more such gems so I can enjoy reading them
I will certainly do my best! 😊
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