Night And Day

kurtis77

It's morning time and I'm tired from the night before.

Me and my friends went exploring and we had become sore - but we stumbled across something.

We went to a beach that we had never been to before.

Each of us, one by one, went into the ocean - thinking something was gonna happen.

But we relaxed and enjoyed swimming, then after a little while we made a fire.

We told scary stories to spook us, and we ate smores.

We were enjoying our time when all of a sudden the sun was starting to come out.

We packed our stuff up and went to the car, only to find that the door was locked.

We looked for the keys (which seemed like an eternity) and managed to find them.

We dodged other cars, took a shortcut through the forest. 

There the car got stuck, and we ran on foot getting cuts and bruises along the way.

We thought hope was lost, the sun kept getting closer!

But we ran and we didnt stop until we got home.

We managed to get home we had beat the sun we all laughed and thought it was great fun.

  • Author: kurtis77 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 27th, 2025 19:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: Having fun with friends in the summer while getting in trouble no matter our age and what we do we"ll always be there for each other.
  • Category: Friendship
  • Views: 9
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  • sorenbarrett

    Teenage fun described in this poem. This takes me back creating a lot of nostalgia. Loved it

    • kurtis77

      I appreciate the comment , thank you for reading my work.

    • Poetic Licence

      Expressing the chilled feeling of hanging out with friends and just being normal, enjoyed the read

      • kurtis77

        Thank you for taking the time to read this, it means a lot to me.

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Tony36

          Excellent write

          • kurtis77

            Thank you very much.



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