Neptune,
Come out of the gloom
Fill these sails
With favorable winds
From the heart
Yogic chart
A course through dark seas
May your submerged
Meridian arts
Keep me
From sailing into the waiting
Harbor of Calixto
Until these eyes
Are weaponized
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Mutley Ravishes (
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Full of metaphor this one falls back on mythology to aid its course and so it does. Lovely
Gotta admit I haven't read much Greek mythology, but it keeps on knocking at the door!
Thanks for stopping by, Soren.
Love this metaphor-rich poem and the Greek mythological reference! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏🔱
Thanks a million!
You're welcome!
Enjoyed this mythologically inspired poem 🙏🏻🕊
Mythology is a well of inspiration!
That it is! A good percentage of mine are inspired by all sorts of mythologies. Keep it up! 🙏🏻🕊
Some great metaphor in this piece to get the Rusty cogs turning, or should i say its all Greek to me,!!, enjoyed the read
Haha! Thanks for dropping by.
You are very welcome
Excellent write
Glad you enjoyed it!
You're welcome
You like 'em better if they're like the cg movies render those "windows to the soul," lit with an eerie supernatural glow?! Or is it rather the antagonistic look which is being referenced as inspiring? I give up. Thank you very much.
You're welcome! It'd take a while to explain it so....lets go to the Greeks for a treat!
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