Thoughts are like the rivers,
that flow via the valleys of yesterday,
and the mountains of tomorrow,
In the present swiftest way.
- Salvia.S
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- Published: March 2nd, 2025 04:26
- Category: Reflection
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Presently and swiftly, adverbs of time and manner that bring us there; so timely and comforting. ππ»π
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This seems simple at first glance but becomes deeper as one ponders. It has many elements here and metaphor is always rich in its meaning. Lovely
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We will note that the destiny of rivers is to end up in the sea. They may roar along, cause rampage, break their banks, etc., but they enter the sea quietly. That is the point where the river becomes the sea. The neutral water of the river becomes salty. Soman Ragavan.
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Few words that are calming and serene, and that's a beautiful picture, enjoyed the read
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Brief, beautiful, and true. This poem speaks wisdom. Well done.
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A fine write S.
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Rivers make wonderful metaphors. A beautiful poem of reflection Salvia.
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So very true Salvia.
Andy
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Wonderfully flowing and reflectively exciting...
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