The River of Thought

Salvia.S

Thoughts are like the rivers,

that flow via the valleys of yesterday,

and the mountains of tomorrow,

In the present swiftest way.

 

- Salvia.S

© Salvia.S

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  • arqios

    Presently and swiftly, adverbs of time and manner that bring us there; so timely and comforting. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

    • Salvia.S

      Thanks for the read and valuable feedback!!!

      • arqios

        You’re welcome πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

      • sorenbarrett

        This seems simple at first glance but becomes deeper as one ponders. It has many elements here and metaphor is always rich in its meaning. Lovely

        • Salvia.S

          Thank you so much for the read and comment. Your feedback is so precious to me πŸ™‚

        • Soman Ragavan

          We will note that the destiny of rivers is to end up in the sea. They may roar along, cause rampage, break their banks, etc., but they enter the sea quietly. That is the point where the river becomes the sea. The neutral water of the river becomes salty. Soman Ragavan.

          • Salvia.S

            You're right. Thanks a lot for the read and comment..

          • Poetic Licence

            Few words that are calming and serene, and that's a beautiful picture, enjoyed the read

            • Salvia.S

              I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the read and kind words....

              • Poetic Licence

                You are very welcome

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Brief, beautiful, and true. This poem speaks wisdom. Well done.

                • Salvia.S

                  Thank you so much for the read and kind words!!

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    You are most welcome, friend.

                  • orchidee

                    A fine write S.

                    • Salvia.S

                      Thank you!!!!

                    • Cassie58

                      Rivers make wonderful metaphors. A beautiful poem of reflection Salvia.

                      • Salvia.S

                        Thank you so much!!!

                      • Goldfinch60

                        So very true Salvia.

                        Andy

                        • Salvia.S

                          Thanks a lot for the read and feedback!!!!

                        • cellinic

                          Wonderfully flowing and reflectively exciting...

                          • Salvia.S

                            Thank you very much dear for the read, comment and fave ❀️❀️!



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