Notice of absence from Caring dove
Sometimes your soul feels sad and your mind feels tired .. not a good day today
Sometimes your soul feels sad and your mind feels tired .. not a good day today
A tree tenderly stands by bluebells
one living with leaves
One with pretty petals
the tree is lightly looking all around and to the soft sky
whilst the bluebell so small in this world
looks to the other bluebells
and to the soft greens in this world
so small
seeing the bark of the tree
sighing as she isn’t seeing light leaves
bluebell can see parts of the tree
feels safe by what she knows to be a grounded strength
feeling small in this world
yet a feeling of being looked after
even without seeing the whole tree with its light leaves
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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A wonderful metaphor and well cast to realize that we don't see the whole picture and to not judge but to rely on what we believe and accept ourselves for who we are. Very nice
Thankyou for the lovely comment .
I think I was just thinking that yeah a bluebell might not be able to see the whole tree .. but still feel ok
What we feel is important and something is still real and there ( even if we don’t see it fully
Sometimes we need to feel looked after and safe when feeling ‘ small ‘
Glad you liked my poem
Love it
Thankyou )))
You're welcome
A fine write dove.
Thankyou ))
It's easy to feel small in this world, let alone this universe. But, what of it? Sometimes, small is okay. If we pull away from the tree to the sky, we'll eventually see the tree is pretty small too! Such wonderful metaphor that really got me thinking. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
Thanks so much for the kind supportive words on my poem .
Yes , we would see it as small
But I think sometimes feeling is very important , but sometimes we get sad when not seeing certain things
Yeah , sometimes feeling small is ok .. but maybe other times can feel scary .. maybe
Thankyou
Oh. It can feel scary for sure. Just ask an ant! You are most welcome, my friend. I love your poetry.
May that brightness shine in your life CD.
Andy
Thanks for the kind words ))
That little bluebell may feel small, but what a light she shines in a dark world. Have a beautiful day.
Thankyou , Cassie )) and hope you have nice day too
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