I am out in the gazing up at the sky, as every little moment passes by
Imma be back but not in time
Im hurt and what could be worse
A Heart Torn in Two
In the quiet whispers of the night,
Her heart dances in twilight's light.
Two souls stand with open arms,
Each with his own tender charms.
The first, a beacon in her past,
A love that seemed destined to last.
With him, laughter flows like a stream,
A shared history, a woven dream.
Yet the second, a thrilling new page,
Ignites her soul, sets the stage.
His eyes, a promise of things unknown,
A future bright, a spirit grown.
In the crossroads of her tender heart,
She finds herself torn apart.
Each path a story yet to unfold,
Each choice a treasure to hold.
She ponders the echoes of her choice,
Hears in her heart, each lover's voice.
One whispers of comfort, safety, and home,
The other sings of adventure, a world to roam.
Caught in the tides of love's gentle sea,
She must decide who she wishes to be.
In the silence, she listens to her heart's call,
And trusts in herself to choose after all.
May she find peace in the journey she makes,
Whichever path her heart truly takes.
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Author:
Lil-M-M (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I think the poem explains it all. I cant be happy when all I am doing is hurting the people I love. I cant do anything anymore. I literally just cant. I'm such a horrible person, and idk why they both like me. I have the one writing c+l and 1
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nah this shit bullshit foreal
Shut up
Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, resonating, exquisite poignancy, this leaves the reader breathless and uncertain, hanging on her choice. I'd vote for the one who offers a secure sense of home over adventure, yet wish the heroine the best, whichever she chooses. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for reading!
Choices are what this life is made of and no matter which it is it is a matter of point of view as to whether it was right or wrong. On can never travel both roads so one can never know for sure whether the choice was right or wrong. I always believe I took the right road.
Thank you for reading and sharing!
lol
I'm dead so pick Clayton btw guys she a bully lol
We all have choices to take and do not know if they are right or wrong until we have taken them, if wrong then hopefully we learn and get right next time, just ensure the choices are your choices, well written
Thank you, your comment is well appreciated.
You are very welcome
What a dilemma! But first we need to determine if this girl is not confusing the concepts of LOVE and CODEPENDENCY. Why? Because a cruel disappointment will tear her heart into four.
Thank you for reading, yea I will keep that in mind!!
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