The Final Song.

Goldfinch60



Soprano to my left,

Soprano to my right,

I was set in a cleft

At the end of the night.

 

Mix yourselves all around the conductor said,

So there we were a four part choir

Not in our set groups as normal

But mixed all over.

So we sang,

We sang our hearts out

Each hearing a different voice,

Different voice at our sides.

We finished the song,

The final song of the night

And all had beaming faces

As a wonderful sound had been made

And smiling and joy abounded

As we came to the end of our day.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 7th, 2025 02:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: This happened at our choir last night, the conductor mixed us all up so we weren't in our set groups we made a wonderful sound and fun was had by all. The video is our choir.
  • Category: Special occasion
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  • arqios

    Always a bit of fun when that happens! Remembering my choir days now πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

    • Goldfinch60

      It surely id arqios, thank you

      • arqios

        You’re welcome Andy πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.

      • sorenbarrett

        It is different when support is not close by and one is forced into self reliance. A great metaphor Andy

        • Goldfinch60

          It surely is soren, thank you.

          Andy

        • Teddy.15

          A change is as good as the rest I do believe. 🀣 Obviously a very trusting conductor 🌹

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true Teddy, it worked out very well, thank you.

            Andy

          • Poetic Licence

            A change can be for the better, enjoyed the read

            • Goldfinch60

              It surely can Tobani, thank you.

              Andy

              • Poetic Licence

                You are very welcome

              • Jerry Reynolds

                Good write, Andy. No where to hide. Please do your part, and it will all work out.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Jerry, it certainly seemed to work.

                  Andy

                • Tony36

                  Excellent write Andy

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Tony.

                    Andy

                    • Tony36

                      You're welcome

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Tremensous work.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Thomas.

                        Andy



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