Lost In a Snowstorm.
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Tobani Feb 2025.
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Something Different
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G o o d w r i t e PL.
Thank you, have a great week
Notice my similar wording to your poem, in my comment, though not so spaced out?! lol.
I did notice
Now that is superbly rendered🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you for your kind words, hope you have escaped the worst of the storm, have a great week
You’re most welcome 🙏🏻🕊️
Now that was clever! Almost missed it and with my poor eyesight had to squint. Reaching across various dimensions you have made your point with an exclamation point. Loved it
Thank you for your kind words, have a great week
Very clever and enjoyable
Thank you for your kind words, have a great week
Loathsome................................................................................
.....................................................................................................stuff
.......................................................................................................................................... snow.
Very good, have a great week
Wow! Loved the minimalism! Perfect. A fave for sure. 🌹👏
Thank you for your kind words, have a great week
You're welcome. You too!
Bravo PL .. such little flakes of brilliance could not go entirely unnoticed .. Neville
Thank you for your kind words, enjoy your week
Touche, very clever!
Thank you for your kind feedback, enjoy your day
How clever. Have you been rescued yet? An original idea Tobani. Good job I had my glasses on to read you.
No I'm still lost, have a great day
Oh! You're a riot!!!! I love it! Almost as good as the one a joke book from too many years ago rendered. Awesome! Delightfully rendered with a haunting poignancy.
Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day
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