Can one life
Suffice
When it comes to mastery?
How many shots do we get
At finding the treasure
In the shipwrecks?
It's been said
That many seeds
Despite hundreds, even thousands
Of journeys
Through the Avitchi
Still prefer to remain asleep
Is this the essence
Of insanity?
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Mutley Ravishes (
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Excellent. This poem speaks to the human experience, it questions our mastery of anything, our opportunities for growth, and the choices we make in the face of repeated chances for change or awakening. I loved the reference to the Avitchi. Well done on this friend...and yay to being the first to comment! 🌹👏
Thanks, Tristan. I can't consciously recall, but if there is substance to what I wrote then I must have spent many a long hour in that furnace too!
You're welcome, my friend!
Dreams are often best or at least better than reality. Mastery often only occurs in dreams although dreams can come true if one plans and works hard enough. A good read.
Yes, they can come true that way. What if there's another way, where the "work" mainly consists of faith, patience , gratitude, and perseverance through Imagination instead of blood, sweat and tears?!
I guess you're having fun. Seriously?! I'll beg to differ and leave it at that. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you.
Yep, seriously!
One shot, then eternal Heaven
Or damnation?
I beg to differ
What teachings of Ben Yeshua
Have been hidden?
The seeds asleep/awakening dynamic is so mystifying and engaging! 🙏🏻🕊
For sure! Now, what would I rather turn out to be, a still sleeping seed or a fully grown tree?
Now that’s meant to be straightforward, full grown would mean whole new batches of seeds and potentialities. 🙏🏻🕊
Haha! Yes, your one step (several?!) ahead of me. No possibility of boredom with infinite Imagination/potentialities.
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