Just hanging in the sky with effortless motion,
Swirling in wide lazy circles, going ever upward,
No wing beats on this fine, sunny, still day;
The occasional mew breaking the peace.
Eyes looking around for mile on mile;
Still going upwards, on this windless day,
Until at last the prey is seen, and like an arrow
It stoops to the ground with incredible speed.
When I come back I want to be a buzzard
Hanging in the sky with that effortless ease.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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What about coming back as a computer that works? LoL ah such sweet thoughts 🌹
No thanks, I used to work in computing, don't want to go there again Teddy.
Andy
I would too if not for the menu. It takes a tough stomach to be a buzzard. A fun and uplifting read Gold
Thank you soren, the menu isn't that bad, |I like my steaks rare. LOL
Andy
We have big kites - the birds - swooping down. Or are they buzzards? KP's an old buzzard. lol.
Red kites are becoming more prolific in this country Orchi and they are beautiful birds.
Andy
Oh, so that’s what happened. Welcome back… reminds me of the vulture society that Mowgli was made an honourary member of. 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you arqios.
~Andy
To be as free as a bird how i dream, enjoyed the read
So very true Tobani, just flying above the world in silence would be wonderful.
Andy
Really enjoyed the read, Andy. I have always happened to love and respect buzzards. A most important part of the food chain and ecosystems they belong to. Besides, bald is beautiful! 🤣
Thank you Tristan, much appreciated.
Andy
Good write, Andy.
Flying high, waiting for the prey to die, then swooping in on the freshly dead.
Thank you Jerry.
Andy
Sounds like a plan.Come back as a buzzard.They are really an amazing bird.Well done mi amigo
It is my plan David, they are an amazing bird to watch.
Andy
Nicely done. A fine write and brilliant song choice. Love that tune! Sinatra also does a great version.
Thanks Tom. Yes the Sinatra one is a classic.
Andy
even the nothing seems to have passed on a message - would you truly like your wish to be realized ? lol
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