I look out to the earl light of dawn,
There I see before me the shining moon,
Glowing for me as this new day does spawn,
And fly me to the moon I start to croon.
A wonderful day awaits me this day,
As the moons’ bright early light has shown me,
Bringing such brightness to show me the way,
Into a day of such wonder and glee.
Another fruitful day in my long life,
As I travel lifes journey into wonder,
And through it all so very little strife,
Giving me so much beauty to ponder.
My long life has been full joy and love,
Seen all the time by that moon above .
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The bright moon shone on me.
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A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
That moon has been your beacon 🌹
It certainly has Teddy, thank you.
Andy
A beautiful declaration of a full and happy life well lived. Very nicely said Andy
So true soren, thank you.
Andy
Yes the Moon is there watching the good times and the even better times. Wonderful poem
It certainly is David, thank you.
Andy
A reliable witness moon by moon🙏🏻🕊
Very true arqios, thank you.
Andy
Your welcome Andy 🙏🏻🕊️
A happy and contented life all witnessed by the ever present moon, lovely write
So kind Tobani, thank you.
Andy
You are very welcome, hope you have a wonderful weekend
Great sonnet, Andy. I truly enjoyed it.
So glad that you enjoyed it Jerry, thank you.
Andy
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