when you fall in love

jim56

when you fall in love your heart will tell you so
you will feel its love as it begins to flow
round and round it goes as it begins to soar
each and every day growing even more

happy ever after you will always stay
with a love so true growing more each day
there to last a lifetime within the heart of you
there for evermore for you whole life through

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 13th, 2025 05:32
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  • sorenbarrett

    Another bright poem this time of love. Very nice Jim

    • jim56

      all the world always needs love
      makes the world go round
      thankyou for always lovely comment
      means lot jim

    • Poetic Licence

      A postive and uplifting write, brightened up the day, enjoyed the read

      • jim56

        hi thanks for comment

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Tony36

          Excellent write Jim

          • jim56

            thaks for comment

            • Tony36

              You're welcome

            • Jerry Reynolds

              A fine write, Jim. Love the rhyme scheme.

              • jim56

                thankyou what a lovely comment means a lot jim

              • Cassie58

                Lovely poem Jim. Everything to like about happy ever afters. Another cold day today. No gardening for me.

                • jim56

                  hi Cassie glad you like poem
                  hope you are well and warn
                  weather been not to bad sunny here
                  still low temps at mo should warm up soon
                  managed to get some storm damaged done
                  seed trays showing plants now
                  to cold to go in garden last frost date here 21st march
                  wont be long get garden ready for summer
                  thankyou for always lovely comment stay well stay warm stay safe jim

                • Buttercup

                  Oh god Jim. This poem is wonderful, exactly what love can be like. Loved it

                  • jim56

                    what a beautiful comment love is good when its true
                    thankyou for comment beautiful xx jim

                  • NafisaSB

                    bright, happy and beautiful message - thanks for sharing - hope everyone has it

                    • jim56

                      hi thanks for comment



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