As I look at the stars above
As I look at space in all it's infinite glory
I realize someone whose mind was bent
Came along and stole my tent
But they left everything else
As I look at the stars above
As I look at space in all it's infinite glory
I realize someone whose mind was bent
Came along and stole my tent
But they left everything else
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With the tent ⛺️ in place the starry night scape would’ve been blocked; the poetic persona’s response to losing their tent 🏕 is quite buoyant and positive. Good stuff Tony 🙏🏻🕊
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Wow! Did not expect that and it was quite the delight. Well done on this, Tony! 🌹👏
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You're welcome!
A poem with deeper meaning Tony loved it
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Wow. Nice work.
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Oh lol, good write Tony.
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They clearly came with bad intent and left with said tent intact .. maybe .. Neville
Thank you, made me grin
Well done, Tony. A fine poem indeed.
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Tony, is that a true story?
No, just a little something floating around in my head
Well, I enjoyed it Tony.
the whole world / universe is now yours : enjoy
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