Stole my tent

Tony36

As I look at the stars above

As I look at space in all it's infinite glory

I realize someone whose mind was bent

Came along and stole my tent

But they left everything else

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  • arqios

    With the tent ⛺️ in place the starry night scape would’ve been blocked; the poetic persona’s response to losing their tent 🏕 is quite buoyant and positive. Good stuff Tony 🙏🏻🕊

    • Tony36

      Thank you

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Wow! Did not expect that and it was quite the delight. Well done on this, Tony! 🌹👏

    • sorenbarrett

      A poem with deeper meaning Tony loved it

      • Tony36

        Thank you

      • Thomas W Case

        Wow. Nice work.

        • Tony36

          Thank you

        • orchidee

          Oh lol, good write Tony.

          • Tony36

            Thank you

          • Neville



            They clearly came with bad intent and left with said tent intact .. maybe .. Neville

            • Tony36

              Thank you, made me grin

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Well done, Tony. A fine poem indeed.

              • Tony36

                Thank you

              • whats write for me

                Tony, is that a true story?

                • Tony36

                  No, just a little something floating around in my head

                  • whats write for me

                    Well, I enjoyed it Tony.

                  • NafisaSB

                    the whole world / universe is now yours : enjoy

                    • Tony36

                      Thank you



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