the late winter moon
lights up in the dark night sky
yet darkness remains
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
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Tristan Robert Lange (
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- Category: Haiku
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And ever beautiful .................... 🌛🌕🌖🌘🌗😉👍
Why, thank you Neville! Much appreciated, my friend! 🐦⬛🖤🙏
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you, Tony!
You're welcome
A beautiful image and metaphor as well all wrapped up in a Haiku. That takes quite a bit. Well done a fave
Thank you, Soren. Much appreciated, my friend! Glad it delivered!!! 🖤🐦⬛🙏
Powerful writing.
Thank you, Thomas! Much appreciated! 🐦⬛🖤
So well crafted, beautiful image, lovely read
Thank you, Tobani! I am glad it delivered! Much appreciated, friend! 🙏🐦⬛🖤
You are very welcome
When it gets lighter, folks say 'The days are getting longer'. But each day is still 24 hours - how are the days getting longer?! heehee.
True story. Now, if they switched that by turning "light" into a compound word such as "daylight"...it wouldn't be an issue! 🤣
Dang! I caught Cynthia perched high overhead ere dawn revealed her lover, knowing she would be at her peak momentarily, forgetting by then to seek her when she truly was. Argh. Thank you for reminding me. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
You are most welcome. Thank you, my friend, for your time and your feedback. Always appreciated! 🐦⬛🖤🙏
Such a haunting visage, hearts peek out, but maybe the darkness is in you and I.
Indeed. Thank you, my friend, for your time and thoughts. Always appreciated! 🙏🐦⬛🖤
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