My Car, Ma

Mutley Ravishes

I carry around 

My false assumptions

In my car, ma

Their weight is so great

The tires have gone flat

I must look like a whack

Job when I keep on taking it

For a drive round the block

 

  • Author: Mutley Ravishes (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 16th, 2025 19:40
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Thank you, thank you for literally making me laugh. You're a regular riot and way too fun. Awesome! I love it!!!

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thank you too. I thought the rhyme was pretty heavy! (excuse the pun).

    • sorenbarrett

      A fun read and brings back memories of some old cars I had. Loved it

    • arqios

      Karma, it’s been said, is a b-—-h🙏🏻🕊sentimental journey to days before power steering! 🚙

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Driving’s becoming a lost art!

        • arqios

          Oh, most definitely! Driving used to be a community joy, the road a shared space. Now it often resembles a battlefield 🙏🏻

        • Poetic Licence

          A very funny entertaining read reminding us of the old bangers we have all had, but also we are all guilty of making to many assumptions, enjoyed the read

          • Mutley Ravishes

            I guess we’re all riddled with false assumptions. Need to work the muscle of self-observation!



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