Am I Alone.
In my mind I have
Thoughts. Failures Ambition
Feelings. Emotions Ideas
Plans. Regrets Voices
Dreams. Remorse Anger
Achievements. Drive Hope
Memories. Hurt Pain
So am I alone ?!!!.
In my heart I have.
Love. Understanding Joy
Hurts. Patiance Sadness
Pain. Wounds Feeling
Compassion. Scars Care
Emotions
So am I alone ?!!!.
Through the window I see.
Dogs. Nature Roads
Cats. Foxes Cars
Birds. Children Postman
Trees. People Delivery Men
Flowers. Houses Sky
Nature. Sun Rain
So am I alone ?!!!.
Yet on this side of the window, I sit alone.
Tobani Jan 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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An amazing mind you have.Fascinating piece.
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We can feel very alone with our emotions thoughts and feelings .. and even around other people .. it can make one very sad .
I can feel very alone , sometimes when I’m around others .. isn’t a nice feeling
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Alone in our togetherness, modern day angst, all with our private joys and fears🙏🏻🕊️
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You are much welcome 🙏🏻🕊
A point made that each term is by itself emphasizes the aloneness of it. There appears to be a pattern in the words which if I stretch may be the panes of a window. Creative. No we are not alone we always have ourselves, thoughts, and emotions.
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Ooh. Yes, I didn't even see the "window pane" initially, but yes! That just adds to the brilliance of this poem! Good observation, Soren!
Good question. I look forward to the day when I can see myself looking at myself through another's eyes!
It would be an interesting view, thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated
I find being alone enjoyable. Free of drama, floating freely in my thoughts. Fertile ground for poetry.
Creative piece.
I agree there is a time, place and importance for having time alone, especially for writing, however for some it's their every day, thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day
A very complex poem With a lot of mixed emotions yet we're never alone we always have Ourself and nature to rely on. Your poem seem to have a question if isolation really exist !
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First. WOW! I LOVE THE STRUCTURE! Sorry for YELLING that at you, but I love experimental poems and this was beautifully structured to feel very much like passing observations before the eyes and in the mind. Well done. Second, this is so my home. I relate to this so much. Alone, but not alone....Not alone, but alone. Thank you for this expression my friend! 🙏🌹👏
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You are welcome!
BRAVO
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You're welcome
We have more conversations in our head than with real people! Good one
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Open that window and door and walk into life with others Tobani. Clever thoughtful write.
Andy
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