Permanently vacant

Poetic Dan

I've always been willing to admit my mistakes and this time it was big.

 

More than I would of ever known, biting off more than I could chew due to my inability to say no! 

 

I maybe just about handling it physically but mentally I'm broken.

 

Part of my light has been shut out, with my spirit for life no longer passionate about seeing each moment unknowingly go by.

 

The only positive vibration is I'll keep breathing until end, no matter the shell that continues holding up this pretence 

 

Apologies to my family and friends, as the journey I'm on and the path I've taken. Has left me in a space that's permanently vacant.

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 21st, 2025 03:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: This and the picture was written a few weeks back but now I'm on here again looking to bring more light into my world. Always appreciated, much peace and respect.
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 17
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  • sorenbarrett

    A sense of powerlessness encompasses this poem there is an apology and a vapid sense of emptiness. All well expressed

    • Poetic Dan

      I think it help but your time and vibration is truly appreciated.
      I'll keep faking it till I make it!

    • Poetic Licence

      Sometimes we go down the wrong path and we are not sure why, although we know it's wrong we continue on our journey, a sense of apologies to those effected and hurt by that journey, nicely expressed and written

      • Poetic Dan

        To many reason really, one can only stop thinking and just keep pretending when I need to but take the time to find a new or maybe once forgotten way to a different life.
        Thank you again for your time
        Always appreciated

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Very well expressed. The emptiness, longing and regret are all palpable. 🌹

        • Goldfinch60

          You have found a good place once more Dan, keep ion going in that direction and all will be well.

          Andy



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