Life, like a river
Moves slowly forward
Some days it brings smiles
Some days will evoke sighs
Some days you get stuck
And you keep wondering ‘why’ ?
Leave life in Fate’s hands
It knows what’s best for you
It will never ever do
Things that you would rue
So move ahead with grace
And a smile on your face
A sway of the hips
And a song on your lips
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That's a very positive write with sound advice, enjoyed the read
thanks for the appreciation. God bless you
You are very welcome
Take the cards you are dealt and make the best of them I get from this poem. A good message nicely said
yes, that's the way to deal with life, though we often forget it, and get caught in our web of misery
thanks for the feedback, have a great weekend
How beautiful, very encouraging and optimistic. Thank you. Best regards.
really glad you resonated with it. thanks. have a good weekend
Very lovely. The sage perspective of maturity gently instructs youthful folly with what may, forsooth, help soften the path oft fraught with stones. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
such a beautiful, heartfelt and poetic response. thank you so much. have a great day
Tremendous work.
thank you so much for your positive feedback. have a productive day/week/month
Have no choice but to accept lifes fate. Can either be postitive and enjoy life or be miserable. Very thought provoking write which in my opinion makes this an excellent read. Thank you.
thank you so much for your feedback.
yes - our attitude is what makes our life joyous or miserable - so let us not drown ourselves in self pity and misery
have a great weekend
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