When you said you loved me
My heart was in bliss
To know my feelings for you
You didn't miss
Together we'll travel
Along life's road
Our hearts as one forever more
Vortex of love
Spinning out of control
The more it pulls me in
The deeper that love grows
Vortex of love
Shared completely with me
Our journey now
Through eternity
At the front of this crowd
We make our stand
Heart to heart
Hand in hand
Never be lonely anymore
As we walk through life's great door
Vortex of love
Spinning out of control
The more it pulls me in
The deeper that love grows
Vortex of love
Shared completely with me
Our journey now
Through eternity
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Author:
Tony36 (
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A lovely poem of the permanence of love and its value. Nicely worded Tony
Thank you
There is this nuance of being sucked into this vortex, centripetally 🙏🏻🕊️
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You’re welcome Tony🙏🏻🕊️
Great poem, Tony!
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Good write T.
Thank you
Wonderful lovelorn words Tony, I could have written these about my life.
Andy
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Lovely write, enjoyed the read
Thank you
You are very welcome
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