What is holding
Awareness
Prisoner on the
Surface?
I remember once
Gasping for breath
Before being taken
Down into the depths
During a session
Of stillness
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Mutley Ravishes (
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This required two reads and some thought before it sunk through. Profound in its implications. Very nicely written. So little says so much.
Thanks, Soren. You always read the rhymes I write. It's much appreciated.
*refuses categorically to answer* Fascinating and intriguing, eerie, you rascal.
Gotta keep you (and myself) on your toes! Thanks for dropping by.
Wow, this one demands and rewards a few reads. The title and the clues area ll there. Its profundity is matched by its brevity. An amazing poem, my friend! 🌹👏
Thanks, Tristan. An acquaintance once told me the ego is nothing but a bunch of fears. I carry a lot of fear, so that must make me a massive ego head!
LOL! Hmmm. Thought-provoking. You are most welcome, my friend!
This would make a great one of those motivational posters people stick in offices etc, enjoyed the read
In the office of Blackrock?!
Thanks for dropping by.
You are very welcome
will have to reread it so that the awareness seeps through...thought provoking
Thank you! I'm working on the body becoming steeped and marinated in awareness. It's crazy how much time I spend unaware of the body...which is always present.
that's so true.. that's good you are doing so - makes me think of how much i am ignoring mine, despite the warning signs..
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