In deep shadows where heartbeats never sound,
A world now lost of love's sweet tender grace,
Where happiness wilts and smiles are not found,
And hope is but a fading ghostly trace.
No warmth of touch to soothe a troubled mind,
Nor whispered words to calm a restless soul,
In solitude the lonely hearts confined,
Each day a struggle never feeling whole.
Bereft of joy, the skies forever grey,
No laughter's echo in the silent air,
Eternal night that never turns to day,
Cold winds of sorrow whispering despair.
Come love divine come back and light our way,
For in your absence life’s a darkened way.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: April 7th, 2025 01:02
- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this after hearing the song that is on the video.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 15
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Teddy.15
Comments8
Thatโs where we wouldnโt wanna live!๐๐ป๐๏ธ
We certainly would not want to live there arqios. Thanks for your comment.
Andy
Youโre welcome Andy ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
Well penned Andy. Love those 60s songs. ๐
Thank you AP, yes we listen to Boom Radio in the car and it is all 50s, 60s and 70s songs.
Andy
My favorite era. ๐
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
A lovely love sonnet Andy. I remember well the song as well.
Most kind soren. So do I.
Andy
A lovely write and a wonderful song tripping down memory lane, enjoyed the read
Much appreciated Tobani. thank you.
Andy
You are very welcome
Beautiful dear Andy. ๐น
Much appreciated Teddy.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Most kind Tony, thank you.
Andy
You're welcome
So true alone is a dank and lonely place. Great write Andy
Much appreciated John, thank you.
Andy
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