React

Tony36

 If I told you that I love you 

How would you react

Would you accept those words as true

Or just laugh in my face

 

If I poured out my heart and soul 

Would you care

Would you welcome me

Or

Would you turn away

 

If I told you that I love you 

How would you react

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  • arqios

    When we drop the if, we usually find outโ€ฆ that can be scaryโ€ฆ good stuff Tony ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

    • Tony36

      Thank you

      • arqios

        Welcome๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

      • sorenbarrett

        A great question to begin a poem. Love is just that not to be rejected but to be given boundaries and respected. A lovely poem Tony

        • Tony36

          Thank you

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Great write, Tony!

        • Poetic Licence

          A very interesting question and a clever write, enjoyed the read

        • Accidental Poet

          Reactions can fall to the left or right. Hopefully to the side you're on. Well penned Tony. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

          • Tony36

            Thank you

          • 2781

            Those words can be cruel sometimes.

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • Cheeky Missy

              You know, I...better leave this pretty number as it stands. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. I love it!

              • Tony36

                Thank you



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