Stars unravel
stitched upon coronal leaves—
a silent weave of cosmic lore.
Silken riddles
unspin cocoons
'mid thund'ry breeze
reverberating forgotten skies.
Keeper’s Ink
Cradle of stardust
bottled moonbeams
riding solar flair— etched upon time's ledger.
Ink of paradox
unbinds unspoken tales
coiling springless clocks
to preserve light's lore.
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Author:
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- Published: April 12th, 2025 02:37
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Beautiful images here my friend, nicely woven into a tapestry of celestial magnificence. So well done
Many thanks Soren๐๐ป๐๏ธ
Paints a lovely peaceful picture, nicely done
Thanks kindly๐๐ป๐๏ธ
You are very welcome
The straw that breaks the camelโs back may be nigh.
And still we canโt tell how it will go over.
I feel like I got a peak behind the curtain to see the thread that binds it all together. Thoughtful, heartfelt, and provoking. Thank you, Arqios for sharing.
Thatโs so nice to hear. Makes the joy of writing complete. Thank you kindly๐๐ป๐
Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is profound and beautiful. Wonderful job, my friend. ๐น๐
Articulative bartendering, perhaps. Thanks my friend๐๐ป๐
Perhaps, indeed. You are most welcome, my friend.
A celestial good write A.
A celestial thanks to you O๐๐ป๐
And as a line of a hymn says - 'On this celestial ball'. Erm, meaning 'the Earth, the globe, the planet!'
That seems familiar, that orb of habitation๐๐๐ป
I see a poet writing about the universe. Very powerful images here.
Thanks David๐๐ป๐
Thanks David, thatโs an exciting image ๐๐๐ป
That light will always be with us arqios.
Andy
That is both a comfort and a hope๐๐ป๐
Love this
Thanks so much๐๐ป๐๏ธ
Your very welcome ๐ซถ๐ป๐๐ป
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