celestial threads

arqios


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Stars unravel
stitched upon coronal leaves—
a silent weave of cosmic lore.

Silken riddles
unspin cocoons
'mid thund'ry breeze
reverberating forgotten skies.

Keeper’s Ink
Cradle of stardust
bottled moonbeams
riding solar flair— etched upon time's ledger.

Ink of paradox
unbinds unspoken tales
coiling springless clocks
to preserve light's lore.

 

 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 12th, 2025 02:37
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 39
  • Users favorite of this poem: Friendship
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  • sorenbarrett

    Beautiful images here my friend, nicely woven into a tapestry of celestial magnificence. So well done

    • arqios

      Many thanks Soren🙏🏻🕊️

    • Poetic Licence

      Paints a lovely peaceful picture, nicely done

      • arqios

        Thanks kindly🙏🏻🕊️

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • arqios

          The straw that breaks the camel’s back may be nigh.

          • arqios

            And still we can’t tell how it will go over.

          • MDStone

            I feel like I got a peak behind the curtain to see the thread that binds it all together. Thoughtful, heartfelt, and provoking. Thank you, Arqios for sharing.

            • arqios

              That’s so nice to hear. Makes the joy of writing complete. Thank you kindly🙏🏻🕊

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is profound and beautiful. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏

              • arqios

                Articulative bartendering, perhaps. Thanks my friend🙏🏻🕊

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Perhaps, indeed. You are most welcome, my friend.

                • Friendship

                  Your poem masterfully explores the cosmic dance between the universe and human insight, where celestial forces intricately weave stories and memories, encapsulating life's profound mysteries. The subject matter beautifully touches upon timeless themes of time, memory, nature, and the cosmic bond that unites all things. The poem may be intended to joyfully celebrate nature's breathtaking beauty and the emotional resonance that the changing seasons evoke in the human experience, inviting readers to revel in the awe-inspiring transformations that unfold in the world around them.

                  • arqios

                    Thanks Friendship, that is a much welcome and appreciated review🕊🙏🏻

                  • orchidee

                    A celestial good write A.

                    • arqios

                      A celestial thanks to you O🙏🏻🕊

                      • orchidee

                        And as a line of a hymn says - 'On this celestial ball'. Erm, meaning 'the Earth, the globe, the planet!'

                        • arqios

                          That seems familiar, that orb of habitation🕊🙏🏻

                        • David Wakeling

                          I see a poet writing about the universe. Very powerful images here.

                          • arqios

                            Thanks David🙏🏻🕊

                            • arqios

                              Thanks David, that’s an exciting image 🕊🙏🏻

                            • Goldfinch60

                              That light will always be with us arqios.

                              Andy

                              • arqios

                                That is both a comfort and a hope🙏🏻🕊



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