Tip Toe In Life.

Goldfinch60



We all move forward in our lives,

Those steps we take

Take us to many places.

Sometimes we take big steps

And they will take us quickly,

Quickly to a new place,

And that place could be good,

Or it could be bad

And those steps may need to stepped back,

Back to start again.

But often we take small steps,

Small steps in the right direction

And they may be the biggest step,

The biggest step in your life

And take you into the wonder,

The wonder of new life.

Just tiptoe if you must,

But you must take those steps.

 

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2025 01:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: We must move forward in our lives.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 16
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  • Poetic Licence

    Always keep moving or nothing changes,positive message to all, enjoyed the read

    • Goldfinch60

      Yes we must keep moving forward Tobani, thank you for your kins words.

      Andy

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome, have a wonderful week

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.
        Can you help? lol. Married to KP, I seem to always take one step forwards, and three steps backwards. Hmmm.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Orchi, just keep moving forward, never go back.

          Andy

        • arqios

          And sometimes we glide forward! πŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

          • Goldfinch60

            We surely do arqios, thank you.

            Andy

            • arqios

              You’re welcome πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

            • sorenbarrett

              Sometimes the smallest can be the biggest and we always keep moving no matter what direction we are going until that day we stop. A lovely write Andy

              • Goldfinch60

                Very true soren, thank you for your kind words.

                Andy

              • David Wakeling

                Some great wisdom here mi amigo.I always learn something from your work

                • Goldfinch60

                  Most kind David, thank you.

                  Andy

                • John Prophet

                  Personal experience, big steps can be difficult. Measured steps less likely to trip over.
                  Nice work Andy.
                  John

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very true John, thankl you.

                    Andy

                  • Tony36

                    Excellent write Andy

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So kind Tony, thank you.

                      Andy

                      • Tony36

                        You're welcome

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        Through the tulips, Andy?😊

                        • Goldfinch60

                          And smell the roses Dave.

                          Andy

                          • Doggerel Dave

                            ....and all of that, AndyπŸ‘



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